ponder 3.5

Hi readers,

I think it is worst in because in Dunedin it is very cold and windy and not very nice.

I wonder why the men invaded the area?

Have you read this book?

Blog you later Oscar

screen plays

Hi readers,

this week  we have been making scripts for our screenplays

here I   what we have so far, it is about a very poor family

                 Spanish vacation:       

By Artem, Raika, Louie & Oscar

An Arlo Production Presents.

 

 location,: Mexico/spain

Jobs:

Cameraman:Oscar

Concept artist: Louie 

Editor: Artem,Oscar 

Script Writer: Artem,Louie,

 

Actor:Louie,Artem,Raika

 

Characters:

Raika:Pedro/malvado, Dad 

Artem: Juan Deigo/Kid

Louie:Antonio Miguel /kid 

Oscar: security guard at mansion,extra 

 

Scene one.film starts with the outside of the house. (maybe an establishing shot)

Raika        Juan, Antonio, Prepararse!  / Raika,mid shot of him talking

Both Kids,wide shot of both of them talking 

Louie    Si Papa  

 , medium close up.

 Where are you going?

  /raika      To Mexico !

Mid shot

 Juan,close up of him getting excited.

 Yay! / 

 Establishing shot, They quickly start to pack for the trip to mexico. 

 

 raika,mid shot. Bye!

 

 Antonio,wide shot of them coming down the stairs

 Nothing, we’re coming.

Scene two: 

Shows the corner of their shack as they come walking round.Camera pans to the boys when they walk around the corner.

 

Over the shoulder shot of Raika,  Artem and Louie  looking at the horrible and manky apartment

 

 Both kids.     Wow this is bad 

(Under their breath)

mid shot of both of them

Osacr     You have a ticket?

dialogue shot of them talking.

Raika: Yes.  

dialogue shot of them talking.

 

Camera over the shoulder, while Raika handing the ticket to oscar/security guard.

 Juan:   Ohh Well this is umm good I guess.

(in sarcastic voice)

wide shot of antonio,juan and raika standing in front of the hotel

Scene three: 

Establishing shots outside the cabin.

Raika: Well kids, I have to go to the reasutraunt to try to get some free food. 

 

 Raika,mid shot from the back of him, opened the door and walked out.

Juaki and Antonio:          see ya dad

Wide shot  of them on their bed saying bye.

Camera shows Raika walking out,establishing a shot of the restaurant.

 Cuts to Raika walking in through the backdoor to the kitchen, pan 

Then he starts to walk up to a person and starts to rob food from the kitchen, he starts robbing another table of food.  (LAS Raika)

 

Over the shoulder shot as the person dials 111.

Raika runs 

 

As stanger looks at him in the background. Camera man cuts to Raika sneaking into the hotel. (MS Raika)  

 

Scene 4:

 

Camera man cuts to Raika being awake,wide shot. Cameraman films Raikas shadow next to Louie & Artem lying down on a bed. 

Raika throws his mask to the ground and says 

Raika      I have done something wrong for the family./’

 The police over the speaker   Sir please come outside, you are under arrest.

Raika   Please we have nothing.

The police over the speaker    Fine this onces.

 Raika   thank you.

 

Objects: Bed & Lamp

 

You need to tidy this up now.

Character speech is like this:

 

Juan I am going to the restaurant now. Bye.

 

Actions are like this:

 

Raika throws his mask to the ground.

 

Use pictures or short versions of camera shots:

 

(MCU Juan) He is talking to Antonio.

 

Also, can you please summarise your story for me? I am having trouble finding a problem and solution or a satisfying ending.

Scene three:  

 

Check out this example for the setting out. You don’t have to use pictures – you can also use codes like CU, MCU, MS, LS, OTS

Have you made a film before?

blog you later Oscar

Amazing Dialouge

Hi readers,

here is some writing I have done this week I hope you like it ,

  1.   As the Ford Anglia flew through the sky Ron yelled  over the roar of the engine.  “There are the tracks but where is the train?”

“I have know idea, we can’t be too far behind” barked Harry “ Try going along the train track”            “Ok I’ll try” 

“Do you hear that? It sounds like the train”

“We can’t be far behind” 

Suddenly there is a loud whistle of the train and Harry, Ron and Hedwig swiveled their heads around to face the Hogwarts express nearing them at quite a speed!

“Ahhhh!” they yelled.

“Turn”  Harry screamed as the car swerved off the tracks, the door opened and Harry slid out hanging from the door, 

“Help” he groaned loudly. Ron put his sweaty hand out and tried to haul Harry in but his hand slipped and Harry slipped further down the door handle. 

“HARRY” moaned ron “I can’t reach you”

 “Here” groaned Harry again holding out his hand

This time Ron grabbed it and pulled Harry up into the car!

“That was close” exclaimed Ron as the car drove off into the distance

2.

“RUN” screamed Helen As the huge robot loomed over them, “create a force field Violet”

“I Its, to hard” She screamed while the root came closer

“NOW” 

“I told you I can’t”

“Do as your mother says” boomed Bob

“Argh, you guys are so annoying,” moanded Violet. Then a blue circle came over violet then faded but the second time it worked and a huge ball came over all of them just in time as the huge robot slammed over them!!

3.

Bob “Hi. Tell me a little about yourself” asked the interviewer.

“Bello, Boom, Boom, Boom like dynamite Butt, Butt, Butt ME NAME BOB” Yelled Bob in minion language  

“ What do you do during the day?

ME PLAY IN LAB, BOOM. Sae, dul, nah Bee do bee do bee do 

“And my final question is, what is your favourite type of fruit and why?”

“Me sa do like bananas too yo no”

Margo, Edith and Agnes “Hi. Tell me a little about yourself” asked the interviewer. 

“My name’s margo and most of the time I have to look after my sisters cause my dad Gru is pretty busy blowing things up and being a bad guy.”replied Margo 

“ What do you do during the day?” 

Like I said I look after my sisters and try to make sure the minions don’t get into trouble. But we also go to school.”   

“And my final question is, what is your favourite type of fruit and why?”

“The only fruit we really ever have in our house is Bananas so I don’t often eat any others.”

Gru “Hi. Tell me a little about yourself” asked the interviewer. 

“I am a pretty good bad guy and like to cause a bit of chaos

My minions are always happy to work and they are good at making things but they can be a bit stupid.” 

“ What do you do during the day?

“During the day I am either in the lab or out being a bad guy.

“And my final question is, what is your favourite type of fruit and why?”

“I have know idea why I really don’t like fruits.”

Have you been doing dialouge at school?

Blog you later Oscar

ponder 4

Hi readers,

if I could give my younger self some advice then it would be not to go down a hill using do hands on a bike and brake my arm and to do better at algebra.

What advice would you give your younger self?

Blog you later Oscar

Ponder two

Hi, readers

I think in twenty years AI & Robots will be doing every thing for us and we will just be getting paid to live because we will not have any Job robots will be doing it all!

What do you think will be happening?

blog you later Oscar

ponder one

Hi readers,

If  I could go back in time would go back to the classical area when the Romans where around and I would tell them how to make a car and phone.  It would also be cool to see there houses and see Julius Ceasur

What time would you like to go back to?

blog you later Oscar